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Post by sakurako on Dec 15, 2005 21:36:21 GMT -5
OOC:: Moderator's Note: -Pokes Quing Yuan and Ayame- Remeber, both of you, 150 words per post, please. I would appreciate it if you would revise your post. Thanks.
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Post by sol on Dec 16, 2005 1:31:15 GMT -5
With all due respect, I feel that I must interveine and post a note to clear some things up. This is in no way meant to hinder this RP thread:
I think they're doing fine. There's only two to four posts I can see that don't meet up to par, but when the plot takes a while to get to a point, there's only so much you can do.
I think that short posts are fine when there's not much the RPer can do about it. It's better than adding unnecessary details and trying to make it look like there's a lot going on. RP's that are long and drawn out tend to be less interesting than RP's that are sweet, finely detailed to full aspect of the situation, and to the point. There's no reason for their posts to be revised. If the pattern of short and unkempt posts continues where more details are needed and could easily be added, then it would be necessary to do so. If you actually read their RP, you will see that their plot is slowing down a bit.
To Quing and Ayame, please carry on with the RP as if nothing was said and do not respond to these posts.
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Post by ayame on Dec 16, 2005 21:24:26 GMT -5
Ayame looked up at Quing Yuan is disbelief. She then gave a wide grin.
"You're a waterbender!" she said, her eyes glowing, "I'd give anything.....well, maybe not anything, but I'd go some pretty hard distances to be able to do that!"
Ayame never quite knew when to shut up, she knew that. Might as well make the most of it, she always thought.
"I'm sorry to hear about your family. I know what it's like to lose someone." she thought of her grandfather, "But it's good to know where you're going. Sometimes I just get lost in my own little world, and I just wander."
She laughed. "That's how I get in trouble. Head in the clouds constantly...."
Ayame then grinned at that. She was a little too proud of that fact.
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