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Post by taka on Jan 6, 2008 2:15:37 GMT -5
Tasujiaeed are going along to BSS. They are talking about how they're going to talk to the Earth King (or whoever else they send) when some FN scouts (this is in some woods about... say, 2-5 miles outside the Wall) overhear their conversation, and immediately pounce on them. Tasu get caught in the first attack, while Jiaeed are able to distance themselves a bit. Tsuya sees that they are unable to defend themselves, and is able to hold off 1-2 soldiers long enough for them all to get away. Since the army is now at BSS, and because she now has compatriots who also want to rescue their friends, she assents to travel with Jiaeed for help. They stumble upon the valley as a likely place of habitation. Once this is found (or about this time in their journey) Tasu are placed in the same tent as the imprisoned Kyoshi warriors and they swap tales about who they are, what they've done against the FN, and how they were caught. Soon after they were caught, they could tell Yasu was Fire Nation, and could tell from there that these people were obviously rebels. They put out a warrant for Jiaeeduya. Since their scouts can travel faster than Jiaeeduya, they get to Gobei's town first. Gobei/one of Gobei's children find Jiaeeduya hiding on their land, and take them in. The soldiers demand to have the town give up anybody they've found recently (Jiaeeduya). Gobei and the some other Earthbenders take them down and steal their uniforms. Then they don the uniforms and go in disguise (with the 'prisoners') to rescue the others. (credit there completely to Aden XD) This rescue can occur during or before the Siege.
The rescue can go however it goes. Either it goes real nicely and nobody figures anything out, or they end up running for their lives. Either way, it's going to be great. XD
After that, the rebels (with no real way to get to the Earth King) will most likely leave the awareness of their existance with the Kyoshi warriors, and probably leave. However, depending on how things go, some of the group might stay. I haven't talked about that with Yasu yet, but either way it happens, this seems like a good storyline IMO.
Is everybody okay with THIS version? ^_^
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Post by mulaqi on Jan 6, 2008 4:01:22 GMT -5
That is...awfully detailed.
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Post by taka on Jan 6, 2008 9:18:49 GMT -5
^^;
I'm sort of a perfectionist, so I've been bothering everybody about it the whole time. I dunno... I sort of discussed that with Jia. I prefer to have things layed out before it happens. She preferred to have a looser RP. *shrug* I'm just weird that way.
Plus, there was a lot to cover. I just wanted to make sure everything was possible within the scope of the plot.
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Post by yasu on Jan 6, 2008 16:03:28 GMT -5
Aw, Taka! -huggles Taka fan doll- He's such my right hand man!! Thank you for doing this; I know you've got a lot on your mind right now.  And I love it. I think its perfect! Yay!! |
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Post by taka on Jan 6, 2008 18:40:59 GMT -5
They make fan dolls of me? o.0
Taka: Fan dolls of ME idiot! DX
-_- Uppity guy, isn't he?
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Post by Teiú on Jan 7, 2008 10:09:26 GMT -5
It is fine as fine can be Taka. EDIT: lol, the story, not the dolls
However, still for this subject (i hadnt been able to enter the Choi without a PC. I was thinking about Teiú sending the message when he lay feet in the EK. There is no way he can be a high rank spy at this point since now he is a deserter being searched through FN. However, i can imagine that, after a test, the high rank guys in the Lun Yang sect may entrust Teiú papers proving the eclipse or showing that some noble spoke about it. However, if this is accepted to all, i must warn it must be not too fast:
Teiú have yet to reach Lun Yang, then prove himself to the sect, then head to Hokage, then get a merchant ship to EK to then send the message when he reachs EK soil. And it may get even harder now since Aden decided that he wants to arrest me. But, anyway, this is my idea and if you guys decide to go with it i will try to rush every step of Teiú's story
And i agree with Taka. I was hoping that Muqali could say what he think about it since he is the main story breaker of FS (lol, im kidding muqali, i mean that you can just see a lot of plot flaws and stuff)
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Post by taka on Jan 7, 2008 18:02:09 GMT -5
He DID say it was awfully detailed. That's the closest thing I've gotten to a compliment. XD
I think Teiu ought to wait and do more important things with the Aangang in the Fire Nation... like Muqali said, the Rebellion there will have a much bigger part to play in the canon plot than will the Rebellion in the EK. Besides, like you said, he hasn't done much to prove himself worthy of doing anything close to what we would need for the other plot to work. In any case, Teiu would be the main character (at least so far) for the Aangang's interaction with the Rebellion in the FN anyway.
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Post by jialingjin on Feb 1, 2008 10:59:09 GMT -5
*Nudge* Yasu, Gandy.. The Thread needs some love!
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Post by taka on Feb 2, 2008 0:08:56 GMT -5
T_T Yasu was supposed to finish Taka's dad's monologue since she'd know what she was talking about. I'll bother her about it.
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Post by yasu on Feb 8, 2008 23:14:42 GMT -5
-comes in Zombie-fied- Sorry it took so long, but I finally posted. School and cligue drama's been messin' me up. But I did what I could. Sorry if it's all over the place. -Zombies off-
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Post by taka on Feb 9, 2008 18:19:10 GMT -5
NOOO! T_T Don't zombie off again! We'll miss you!
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Post by gengoro on Feb 19, 2008 14:36:57 GMT -5
<_< Can I still be part of this Rebellion for the siege?
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Post by taka on Feb 19, 2008 23:20:17 GMT -5
It wouldn't really even be in the city... so... I dunno. I guess you can come if you want, but you'd have to find a way out of the city and back to the encamped Fire Nation somehow. Not really plausible, but if you can pull it off, go ahead. ^^;
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