Post by Nanuk on Jul 17, 2008 5:39:43 GMT -5
Not sure if I can get this into the contest, but I'm posting it here anyway because I dont know where else to. XP Oh, and just to annoy Ryota, I used his FAAAAVORITE color. XD
Name: Mhei Lin Yuritsu ( called the viper) (Oh, this'll be good)
Age: sixteen, Birthday March 28th (I wasn't aware that "Birthday March 28th" was an age...)
Gender: female
Nation: fire nation citizen (HAH, Fire Nation should be capitalized, learn ur English!)
Bender?: benders are over rated (So is saying anything other than yes or no here)
Physical Appearance: Her body is wirey and thin with narrow hips and gaunt features. Mhei lin's legs are long as well as her arms but over all she is of average height. Over Five feet in hieght yet not over six.(Oooh... way to be nice and vague)Like many fire nation citizens she has a pale hue to her skin that some might call milky white. Golden orbs are set deep into her face (That sounds painful...)with dark lining around them drawing attention to them, it's done with a combination of her own dark eyelashes and black makeup she insists on wearing. Mhei Lin wears surprisingly light (OMG it's blinding me cuz it's so surprisingly light!)gloss on her lips to make them shine a great differance from the morbid aura she gives off.
Her glare has a bite to it like a viper, (So her golden orbs have teeth now?)which is what people call her behind her back. (They shouldn't need to, I doubt she can see through those orbs of hers)She has long smooth and yet boney hands with elongated nails generally left natural though in one of her '(emo)moods' she may paint them deep black. Deep oynx hair with scarlet highlights hang barely to her shoulders cut carefully to frame her face and let her look feminine without it falling over her shoulders to get into her face. A braid or two can sometimes be found in her smooth straight locks where it's a touch too long for her tastes. There is a large hunk of long hair that falls over her ears trailing to her collar but she keeps the ends in a metal orniment.(oooh.. being vague again.)
Clothing/Armor: Scarlet robes always adorn her figure(Even when she's nakie??), while she is in a stable place it includes fairly regal looking dresses with golden or black trim. Almost all of them tying at her waist with her favorite crimson sash designed in gold thread with flames.(From the Fire Nation and has flames on her clothes? NO WAI) Jewelry is not of any interest to her so she never wears it. A must with everything she wears is large sleaves that store many of her tools of the trade. On her feet are always stable stiff shoes that give her protection and easy motion (Easy motion? Cuz shoes totally make it easier to walk, they just make it hurt less. XP)
Weapons: Although she can and will use martial arts to get her point across,(Oooh... scary.) Mhei lin has controll of various poisons and poltaces that can have various effects on the target depending on the chemicals used and the ammount administered. Being able to break down almost any poison into an antidote is what she does for fun. It makes her a helpfull and yet dangerous woman(O.o Quite a hobby you got there...)
Personality: She's cold and manipulating to most but when it's needed she can put on an innocent disguise to get people to trust her.(After what I've read so far, I trust her already!) If it does work it's not a big deal. She'll just kill you.(Uh ohs.) Her nature makes her cold and seperated from society though she will voice her beleifs.(Seems a bit contradictory, don't you think?) Mhei Lin loves her Nation(Now you capitalize it...) and would do anything to defend it. She's no where near above the ability to kill. She's done so twice already and enjoys the feeling more and more each time. For an odd enough reason she never inherited her fathers kindness though she admires him.
Background: Mhei Lin ws born into a family of apacarthys, they owned a shop in the capital of the firenation (CAPITALIZE!! RAWR!)and were set for life. Many fire nation (I'm starting to not care anymore...)citizens needed them for everything from rare tea blends to poisons and cures for burns. Growing up in this enviorment she was an only child and more often then not she had to be watched so she didn't eat things that children shouldn't.(No, don't eat that plant! IT'LL MAKE YOU WANT TO KILL!) Her nanny was a girl named Xie Peiqi whom as Mhei Lin grew up she came to hate.(Probably due to the plant...*nods*) Her mother was always flaunting herself around at any event where firenation (*cough*)nobles were invited while her father minded the shop keeping their status in the fire nation.(*sigh*) Mhei lin hated her Mother just as much as her nanny, the woman was a drunk floozy and would probly walk out on her father as soon as something better came along. Of her parents Mhei Lin only loved her father. (Emo kid complex/Zuko complex?)He took the time to teach her about various plants and how each one could be used in various ways. From him she learned the art of medicines and poison. He in turn adored his daughter and made sure she had the best of everything, even sending her to a special girls school.(Probably a good idea, bub, get her away from that mainstream school, then she can massacre some rich kids)
Life at school was annoying for Mhei Lin. She was a bit of an outcast but because of the political motivations she made friends. (Outcast with friends? Explain that one to me, please.)Azula Ty Lee and Mai attended the same school though she had very little interaction with them. (OMGWTFHAXORZ CANON INTERACTION!)Mhei Lin focused on her studys and soon was pushed to the top of her class. It took a toll on her personal life but it was benifitical to her family. About this time Mhei Lin poisoned her nanny who always doted on her, the woman was annoying and the tears as they pulled her out of the house faded after she was no longer a suspect. Leaving only a smirk.(Wait... not Zuko complex... Light Yagami complex. Yup, nailed it. Also, without reading the rest of the profile, I'm going to guess that she kills her mother after she cheats.)
Mhei Lin helped her father in the shop once she was old enough often practicing for the day when she would need to be of use to the firenation.(*Hacks up a lung kind of cough*) She firmly beleived in a manifest destiny that the eath kingdom and water nation (If I coughed accordingly to the amounts of mistakes right there I would be dead twice over.) should be put out of the way. She often would go to hear any announcements the fire lord (*Can officially cough no more*)had to offer and when General Iroh came by her fathers shop for some burn medications for his disgracefull nefew (Does his 'nefew' have a curphew? Also, OMGWTFHAXORZ MOAR CANON INTERACTION!!)she didn't know why her father didn't turn him away. Propoganda in the firenation (*Proceeds to rip lungs out of chest*)had completely warped her by the time she was twelve.
As suspected her mother left for a wealthy merchant leaving the father and daughter the last of their family left. Her father was heart broken but Mhei Lin was extatic, the treacherous woman was no longer a bother to her. Only days after her marriage to the merchan Mhei Lins mother was found dead, they say it was suicide but the poison released via a present of sweet smelling incense from her daughter had been cleared from the air before the soldiers arrived.(I KNEW IT!!)
Sample RP: Mhei Lin chewed on a leaf trying to ignore it's bitter taste while her eyes skimmed over a flyer about the avatar. She nearly teared up in laughter, it was a small child and no one had been able to catch him yet. "how pathetic....." She smoothed her hair and set the longer strands along her face into a gold clasped end. Swalling the leaf she knew it'd make her sick, but sick from it once would be better then dead from it later. What good would it be if she couldn't handle the poisons she worked with.
"father! do we have any customers?" She walked to the store front from her room through the hall smoothing the sleaves of her outfit. The man in question looked at her casting a tired smile. He was worn from age though still seemlingly happy. The death of his ex wife bothered him still, it was already a month she was gone, he should have gotten over it by now. She was ash now, gone.
" not right now my little snake" Mhei Lin nodded and gave him a hug and a kiss on the cheek before heading to the greenery in the back. The carnivorous plants still had to be fed.
She wanted to do something about the state of things, if the avatat was still on the loose then the firelord would have problems, especially if he lived long enough to actually become a man. What could she do for her nation? (Not much to mention here besides more capitalization Nazi banter...)
Pretty much just learn what the hell a shift key is, and not make homocidal 16 year olds...XD
Name: Mhei Lin Yuritsu ( called the viper) (Oh, this'll be good)
Age: sixteen, Birthday March 28th (I wasn't aware that "Birthday March 28th" was an age...)
Gender: female
Nation: fire nation citizen (HAH, Fire Nation should be capitalized, learn ur English!)
Bender?: benders are over rated (So is saying anything other than yes or no here)
Physical Appearance: Her body is wirey and thin with narrow hips and gaunt features. Mhei lin's legs are long as well as her arms but over all she is of average height. Over Five feet in hieght yet not over six.(Oooh... way to be nice and vague)Like many fire nation citizens she has a pale hue to her skin that some might call milky white. Golden orbs are set deep into her face (That sounds painful...)with dark lining around them drawing attention to them, it's done with a combination of her own dark eyelashes and black makeup she insists on wearing. Mhei Lin wears surprisingly light (OMG it's blinding me cuz it's so surprisingly light!)gloss on her lips to make them shine a great differance from the morbid aura she gives off.
Her glare has a bite to it like a viper, (So her golden orbs have teeth now?)which is what people call her behind her back. (They shouldn't need to, I doubt she can see through those orbs of hers)She has long smooth and yet boney hands with elongated nails generally left natural though in one of her '(emo)moods' she may paint them deep black. Deep oynx hair with scarlet highlights hang barely to her shoulders cut carefully to frame her face and let her look feminine without it falling over her shoulders to get into her face. A braid or two can sometimes be found in her smooth straight locks where it's a touch too long for her tastes. There is a large hunk of long hair that falls over her ears trailing to her collar but she keeps the ends in a metal orniment.(oooh.. being vague again.)
Clothing/Armor: Scarlet robes always adorn her figure(Even when she's nakie??), while she is in a stable place it includes fairly regal looking dresses with golden or black trim. Almost all of them tying at her waist with her favorite crimson sash designed in gold thread with flames.(From the Fire Nation and has flames on her clothes? NO WAI) Jewelry is not of any interest to her so she never wears it. A must with everything she wears is large sleaves that store many of her tools of the trade. On her feet are always stable stiff shoes that give her protection and easy motion (Easy motion? Cuz shoes totally make it easier to walk, they just make it hurt less. XP)
Weapons: Although she can and will use martial arts to get her point across,(Oooh... scary.) Mhei lin has controll of various poisons and poltaces that can have various effects on the target depending on the chemicals used and the ammount administered. Being able to break down almost any poison into an antidote is what she does for fun. It makes her a helpfull and yet dangerous woman(O.o Quite a hobby you got there...)
Personality: She's cold and manipulating to most but when it's needed she can put on an innocent disguise to get people to trust her.(After what I've read so far, I trust her already!) If it does work it's not a big deal. She'll just kill you.(Uh ohs.) Her nature makes her cold and seperated from society though she will voice her beleifs.(Seems a bit contradictory, don't you think?) Mhei Lin loves her Nation(Now you capitalize it...) and would do anything to defend it. She's no where near above the ability to kill. She's done so twice already and enjoys the feeling more and more each time. For an odd enough reason she never inherited her fathers kindness though she admires him.
Background: Mhei Lin ws born into a family of apacarthys, they owned a shop in the capital of the firenation (CAPITALIZE!! RAWR!)and were set for life. Many fire nation (I'm starting to not care anymore...)citizens needed them for everything from rare tea blends to poisons and cures for burns. Growing up in this enviorment she was an only child and more often then not she had to be watched so she didn't eat things that children shouldn't.(No, don't eat that plant! IT'LL MAKE YOU WANT TO KILL!) Her nanny was a girl named Xie Peiqi whom as Mhei Lin grew up she came to hate.(Probably due to the plant...*nods*) Her mother was always flaunting herself around at any event where firenation (*cough*)nobles were invited while her father minded the shop keeping their status in the fire nation.(*sigh*) Mhei lin hated her Mother just as much as her nanny, the woman was a drunk floozy and would probly walk out on her father as soon as something better came along. Of her parents Mhei Lin only loved her father. (Emo kid complex/Zuko complex?)He took the time to teach her about various plants and how each one could be used in various ways. From him she learned the art of medicines and poison. He in turn adored his daughter and made sure she had the best of everything, even sending her to a special girls school.(Probably a good idea, bub, get her away from that mainstream school, then she can massacre some rich kids)
Life at school was annoying for Mhei Lin. She was a bit of an outcast but because of the political motivations she made friends. (Outcast with friends? Explain that one to me, please.)Azula Ty Lee and Mai attended the same school though she had very little interaction with them. (OMGWTFHAXORZ CANON INTERACTION!)Mhei Lin focused on her studys and soon was pushed to the top of her class. It took a toll on her personal life but it was benifitical to her family. About this time Mhei Lin poisoned her nanny who always doted on her, the woman was annoying and the tears as they pulled her out of the house faded after she was no longer a suspect. Leaving only a smirk.(Wait... not Zuko complex... Light Yagami complex. Yup, nailed it. Also, without reading the rest of the profile, I'm going to guess that she kills her mother after she cheats.)
Mhei Lin helped her father in the shop once she was old enough often practicing for the day when she would need to be of use to the firenation.(*Hacks up a lung kind of cough*) She firmly beleived in a manifest destiny that the eath kingdom and water nation (If I coughed accordingly to the amounts of mistakes right there I would be dead twice over.) should be put out of the way. She often would go to hear any announcements the fire lord (*Can officially cough no more*)had to offer and when General Iroh came by her fathers shop for some burn medications for his disgracefull nefew (Does his 'nefew' have a curphew? Also, OMGWTFHAXORZ MOAR CANON INTERACTION!!)she didn't know why her father didn't turn him away. Propoganda in the firenation (*Proceeds to rip lungs out of chest*)had completely warped her by the time she was twelve.
As suspected her mother left for a wealthy merchant leaving the father and daughter the last of their family left. Her father was heart broken but Mhei Lin was extatic, the treacherous woman was no longer a bother to her. Only days after her marriage to the merchan Mhei Lins mother was found dead, they say it was suicide but the poison released via a present of sweet smelling incense from her daughter had been cleared from the air before the soldiers arrived.(I KNEW IT!!)
Sample RP: Mhei Lin chewed on a leaf trying to ignore it's bitter taste while her eyes skimmed over a flyer about the avatar. She nearly teared up in laughter, it was a small child and no one had been able to catch him yet. "how pathetic....." She smoothed her hair and set the longer strands along her face into a gold clasped end. Swalling the leaf she knew it'd make her sick, but sick from it once would be better then dead from it later. What good would it be if she couldn't handle the poisons she worked with.
"father! do we have any customers?" She walked to the store front from her room through the hall smoothing the sleaves of her outfit. The man in question looked at her casting a tired smile. He was worn from age though still seemlingly happy. The death of his ex wife bothered him still, it was already a month she was gone, he should have gotten over it by now. She was ash now, gone.
" not right now my little snake" Mhei Lin nodded and gave him a hug and a kiss on the cheek before heading to the greenery in the back. The carnivorous plants still had to be fed.
She wanted to do something about the state of things, if the avatat was still on the loose then the firelord would have problems, especially if he lived long enough to actually become a man. What could she do for her nation? (Not much to mention here besides more capitalization Nazi banter...)
Pretty much just learn what the hell a shift key is, and not make homocidal 16 year olds...XD
