Wimp Lo

[nateya11]

Name: Wimp Lo

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Nation of Origin: Fire Nation

Bender? What Element?: Fire, fighting style consists of very acrobatic flips, and kicks. His fire isn't actually used for hitting it is fired extremely close to his opponent and as they flinch he bounds over and with three fast and precise strikes paralyzes him or her and then disappears in a flash of flame.

Physical Appearance: Tall often mistaken for being clumsy , short black hair cut neatly at his brow, slight build of a long distance runner. His skin well tanned from many days working in the fields, his eyes are a deep chocolate brown. His lips faintly curling at the ends as if he was sharing a private joke, his nose slightly upturned giving him an air of royalty.


Clothing: Blood red short sleeved shirt, the sleeve lined along his triceps, the hem of his shirt reaching his wait, under his shirt a skin tight black shirt defines every muscled on his stomach and back. A light red scarf lines along his neck running down to his chest, his shorts are an orange-red hue, the hem just reaching the bottom of his knees.

Equipment?: Two Kama's are hooked on loops hanging one n each side of his hips, the weapons are more for friendly dueling then actual attacks, when someone challenges he pulls them out and the two observe each others weapons first looking for faults then for speed accuracy and how they swing, Wimps Kama's are specially made for his arms, his arms were measured carefully then the handles were made just to fit his hands and make it so hey were not too long nor too short, the Kama's move with an elegance not expected from the way he holds them. The weapons twirling with a swift blurred motion.

Personality: He loves to tell stories of when he and his father had training together, his voice is know to silence a crowd, the authority in his voice reveals his place n society, his gentle with friends, and fierce with enemies, often he is found rough housing or fighting with other young gentlemen. He is often referred to as being a very outspoken young man giving his opinion sometimes when not asked. His sense of humor is not all that great but he knows a few jokes he finds funny.


Background: His lineage is of the Lo family his family well known or its sail in cabbages, His father's cabbage sails his come to an abrupt end when the avatar had destroyed his best cabbages, His father vowing for vengeance had his son trained for many many years to become a chi blocker so that his cabbage sails will never come to harm ever again, his father was so devoted he never saw the sins that Wimp was a fire-bender.


Sample RP: Wimp Lo Age: 15
Wimp Lo was practicing his fire-ending when things all went wrong
"Wimp?" called his mother, "its time to eat"
"coming give me a second" replied Wimp as he shot three more precise blasts at a wall
"What are you doing?" called his mother again
then he shot one more blast this time at the entrance, "AHHH" screamed his mother as she writhed in pain on the ground, the fire had hit her. "MOM" yelled Wimp rushing to her side, the fire had scorched her face leaving the skin burned to the bone, "What's going on??" cried Wimps father as he saw Wimp bending over his mother, she got burned" replied Wimp frantically as his mother started to slow down her squirming on the ground her breathing coming in rapid dry rasps, finally she gave one last desperate inhale. She was dead. "WHAT DID YOU DO!?!?" SCREAMED Wimps father flinging Wimp away from his mothers body, "I- didn't m-mean to" stammered Wimp as he stared shocked at his mother. "get away here i take away your inheritance and i ban you from ever coming here again" whispered his father to enraged to speak. Scared Wimp Lo stumbled out of his house and away from all that he knew.

[Uhchakuhlak]

Velcome!

So you're Danno's bro, right? I'm told that since you're the little brother I'm allowed to be a little rough on you. >=)

Not a big problem but you might want to recheck your work every now and then as you keep skipping letters in your words here and there or use homophones (e.g. sail, sale, sell, cell). I can read what you mean but it's not a huge problem or hindrance, just informing you of a quirk.

But either way, welcome to the club and stay with us for a while.

Name:[/u]
For starters, head up into your profile, then "modify profile" and change your display name to the name of your character's, please.

Your brother told us the reference... eh, I guess I can let it slide.

Bender? What Element?:[/u]
I almost want more than this, yet somehow it seems decent enough.

However, I say nay as to paralysation techniques. That, I rather we leave available only to the chi-blockers and most non-benders.

Physical Appearance:[/u]
How tall is he, above average height, very tall, extremely tall,? Why is he mistaken for clumsy? Is he clumsy? Does his hair have any particular style? How short is his hair?

How is his build like a long distance runner? Any other notable features about him (other than extra detail I request, you're good as is)?

Clothing:[/u]
If you need help with more specific colors, you can use our color list for aid.

Most of the clothing are good but a part of me wants a bit more description. But I'll leave that choice up to you.

Otherwise: does he wear any shoes? What do they look like? Is the black undershirt short sleeves, long or what? And why does he have a scarf if he has warm weather clothes?

Equipment?:[/u]
Gonna say nay to the kama. See no real reason why your character needs them. Especially since he's a firebender, and more so a firebender in Korra's timeline.

However, the equipment slot can include other things such as a vehicle, luggage, pet, etc.

Personality:[/u]
You list a lot of useful traits to play with when using your characters but that doesn't really display or explain anything about them. Dive into some detail with them.

What sort of stories and jokes does he usually tell and why? Does he tell them to anyone else? Why is his voice so enthralling to others? What sort of quality does it have that it can entrance others? How does he often use it? What are some ways he acts or treats his friends and foes? How does he often behave? How does he often behave about others?

Does he have any hobbies, ambitions or dreams? What sort of matters put him in a particular mood (i.e. happy, sad, angry, etc.)? Does he have any hopes or fears? What sort of opinions does he have about people, events, society, etc.?

Background:[/u]
Sorry, but too close to a canon family to be allowable in our rules, I think. Yet by itself it doesn't make a whole lot of sense for character backstory and motivation, even in a comedic light.

Other than that, as character backgrounds go around here: it's much too skimp. Take your character and give a rundown of much of their life as you can conjure. The life of their early childhood and any important events or memories they had. His life as a youth, his family, discovering and interacting with the world around him, his awakening as a firebender. Personal activities, then onto his teenage years and now into the precipice of adulthood. And finally events of his life up to now.

That sort of thing.

Sample RP:[/u]
Thought you were Danno until he said you were his lil bro. You both have that style of not double spacing your text. =p

Anyway, you'll likely end up coming up with a different/new sample to match the background of your character better. It will also need to be recent in the character's life. Think of the RP sample as your character's introduction post.